TOGA promo stuff.. WIP
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i've redone it a bit, let me know what you think of this one, think it looks better but not sure if it needs something else...
http://www.bf3com.co.uk/kello/
http://www.bf3com.co.uk/kello/
Good effort Kello, however, I think the amount of animation is overkill, I don't think anyone will hang around long enough to see the full content, which is a shame because it's all good.
Maybe you can reduce the amount of animation? Or increase the speed?
Maybe you can reduce the amount of animation? Or increase the speed?
looks good kello, but yeah would be good if it sped up...you could have two lines of text appearing soon after each other?
Love it! 
however as the others have said, people will rarely hang around for it. The website address needs to be a lot faster, maybe with the sound of gunfire from a LMG and the letters hitting to each shot? The only other comment I have is on join today near the end, put a ! instead of ? You need to make it sound like they have to, not that they can think about it!
however as the others have said, people will rarely hang around for it. The website address needs to be a lot faster, maybe with the sound of gunfire from a LMG and the letters hitting to each shot? The only other comment I have is on join today near the end, put a ! instead of ? You need to make it sound like they have to, not that they can think about it! 
I like both the idea's, I would say that for me Massv, there's too much going on in such a small space.
Perhaps make a series of them showing off each different servers or making the text red for the server ips?
When I look at it, my eyes really don't know where to focus.
The general idea of banners etc should be instant message, with both of them there's just too much info to take in.
Perhaps make a series of them showing off each different servers or making the text red for the server ips?
When I look at it, my eyes really don't know where to focus.
The general idea of banners etc should be instant message, with both of them there's just too much info to take in.
ok ive speeded it up and added some sound, bearing in mind i'm doing this on my laptop i dont think its looking to bad at the mo
http://www.bf3com.co.uk/kello/
feedback please
http://www.bf3com.co.uk/kello/
feedback please
Much better, Still think the "Do you have......" is a little slow.
Could it maybe cascade in with the last animation.. i.e. top to bottom at the same speed as the image animation? Maybe as a solid block of text with the final cascading line over the image, maybe with a little bounce if its not too much
I really like the TOGA symbol at the start, more of that would be good
I'm gonna try and get some decent screenshots of some knifing kills later and put one together myself, opportunity permitting of course, not to pee on your bonfire of course, just because I can and I quite like a bit of graphics.
Could it maybe cascade in with the last animation.. i.e. top to bottom at the same speed as the image animation? Maybe as a solid block of text with the final cascading line over the image, maybe with a little bounce if its not too much
I really like the TOGA symbol at the start, more of that would be good
I'm gonna try and get some decent screenshots of some knifing kills later and put one together myself, opportunity permitting of course, not to pee on your bonfire of course, just because I can and I quite like a bit of graphics.
Amazing job mate 
But i'm not hearing any sounds bud
EDIT: Scratch that last bit,put headphones in ears and heard it just great
But i'm not hearing any sounds bud
EDIT: Scratch that last bit,put headphones in ears and heard it just great
Promo banner updated with new server and Darcy's comments about too cluttered... same info just hopefully a little easier to read...
Massv,any chance when you get a minute you can bang one out to accomadate the CS:GO scene.Same background maybe but one with just the CS server details and we are recruiting,blah,blah,blah.wouldn't mind pushing the recruitment thing on that game too.